You shames of Rome! you herd of-Boils and plagues' Plaster you o'er; that you may be abhorr'd Or, by the fires of heaven, I'll leave the foe, You shames of Rome! you herd of-Boils and plagues &c.] This passage, like almost every other abrupt sentence in these plays, was rendered unintelligible in the old copy by inaccurate punctuation. See Vol. VI. p. 140, n. 8; Vol. ÎV. p. 425, n. 4; Vol. VII. p. 37, n. 3; and p. 272, n. 2. For the present regulation I am answerable. "You herd of cowards Marcius would say, but his rage prevents him. In a former passage he is equally impetuous and abrupt: 66 -one's Junius Brutus, "Sicinius Velutus, and I know not 'sdeath, "The rabble should have first," &c. Speaking of the people in a subsequent scene, he uses the same expression: 66 Are these your herd? "Must these have voices," &c. Again: "More of your conversation would infect my brain, being the herdsmen of the beastly plebeians." In Mr. Rowe's edition herds was printed instead of herd, the reading of the old copy; and the passage has been exhibited thus in the modern editions: "You shames of Rome, you! Herds of boils and plagues "Plaster you o'er!" MALONE. Another Alarum. The Volces and Romans re-enter, and the Fight is renewed. The Volces retire into Corioli, and MARCIUS follows them to the Gates. So, now the gates are ope :-Now prove good seconds: 'Tis for the followers fortune widens them, Not for the fliers: mark me, and do the like. [He enters the Gates, and is shut in. 1 SOL. Following the fliers at the very heels, LART. O noble fellow ! Who, sensible, outdares his senseless sword, Who, sensible, outdares-] The old editions read: Thirlby reads: "Who, sensible, outdoes his senseless sword. He is followed by the later editors, but I have taken only his correction. JOHNSON. Sensible is here, having sensation. So before: "I would, your cambrick were sensible as your finger." Though Coriolanus And, when it bows, stands up! Thou art left, Mar cius: A carbuncle entire,' as big as thou art, Were not so rich a jewel. Thou wast a soldier Even to Cato's wish: not fierce and terrible Only in strokes ;' but, with thy grim looks, and has the feeling of pain like other men, he is more hardy in daring exploits than his senseless sword, for after it is bent, he yet stands firm in the field. MALONE. The thought seems to have been adopted from Sidney's Ar cadia, edit. 1633, p. 293: "Their very armour by piece-meale fell away from them: and yet their flesh abode the wound sconstantly, as though it were lesse sensible of smart than the senselesse armour," &c. STEEVENS. ? A carbuncle entire, &c.] So, in Othello: 1 "If heaven had made me such another woman, "I'd not have ta'en it for her." MALONE. Thou wast a soldier Even to Cato's wish: not fierce and terrible In the old editions it was: Calvus' wish: Plutarch, in The Life of Coriolanus, relates this as the opinion of Cato the Elder, that a great soldier should carry terrour in his looks and tone of voice; and the poet, hereby following the historian, is fallen into a great chronological impropriety. THEOBALD. The old copy reads-Calues wish. The correction made by Theobald is fully justified by the passage in Plutarch, which Shakspeare had in view: "Martius, being there [before Corioli] at that time, ronning out of the campe with a fewe men with him, he slue the first enemies he met withal, and made the rest of them staye upon a sodaine; crying out to the Romaines that had turned their backes, and calling them againe to fight with a lowde voyce. For he was even such another as Cato would have a souldier and a captaine to be; not only terrible and fierce to lay about him, but to make the enemie afeard with the sounde of voyce and grimnes of his countenance." North's translation of Plutarch, 1579, p. 240. his Mr. M. Mason supposes that Shakspeare, to avoid the chronological impropriety, put this saying of the elder Cato" into the The thunder-like percussion of thy sounds, 2 Re-enter MARCIUS, bleeding, assaulted by the Enemy. 1 SOL. LART. Look, sir. 'Tis Marcius: Let's fetch him off, or make remain3 alike. [They fight, and all enter the City. mouth of a certain Calvus, who might have lived at any time." Had Shakspeare known that Cato was not contemporary with Coriolanus, (for there is nothing in the foregoing passage to make him even suspect that was the case,) and in consequence made this alteration, he would have attended in this particular instance to a point, of which almost every page of his works shows that he was totally negligent; a supposition which is so improbable, that I have no doubt the correction that has been adopted by the modern editors, is right. In the first Act of this play, we have Lucius and Marcius printed instead of Lartius, in the original and only authentick ancient copy. The substitution of Calues, instead of Cato's, is easily accounted for. Shakspeare wrote, according to the mode of his time, Catoes wish; (So, in Beaumont's Masque, 1613: "And what will Junoes Iris do for her?") omitting to draw a line across the t, and writing the o inaccurately, the transcriber or printer gave us Calues. See a subsequent passage in Act II. sc. ult. in which our author has been led by another passage in Plutarch into a similar anachronism. 3 as if the world Were feverous, and did tremble.] So, in Macbeth : "Was feverous, and did shake." STEEVENS. MALONE. -make remain—] is an old manner of speaking, which means no more than remain. HANMER. SCENE V. Within the Town. A Street. Enter certain Romans, with Spoils. 1 ROM. This will I carry to Rome. 2 ROM. And I this. 3 ROM. A murrain on't! I took this for silver. [Alarum continues still afar off. Enter MARCIUS, and TITUS LARTIUS, with a Trumpet. MAR. See here these movers, that do prize their hours At a crack'd drachm! Cushions, leaden spoons, Irons of a doit, doublets that hangmen would Bury with those that wore them,5 these base slaves, prize their hours-] Mr. Pope arbitrarily changed the word hours to honours, and Dr. Johnson, too hastily I think, approves of the alteration. Every page of Mr. Pope's edition abounds with similar innovations. MALONE. A modern editor, who had made such an improvement, would have spent half a page in ostentation of his sagacity. JOHNSON. Coriolanus blames the Roman soldiers only for wasting their time in packing up trifles of such small value. So, in Sir Thomas North's translation of Plutarch: "Martius was marvellous angry with them, and cried out on them, that it was no time now to looke after spoyle, and to ronne straggling here and there to enrich themselves, whilst the other consul and their fellow citizens peradventure were fighting with their enemies." 5 doublets that hangmen would STEEVENS. Bury with those that wore them,] Instead of taking them as their lawful perquisite. See Vol. VI. p. 349, n. 8. MALONE. |